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winter? by ~Papillon-Raissa:iconPapillon-Raissa:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Open


slender fingers stroke icey sheets hung in crystalline air.

breathe.


a cloud of soul mists on the branches of the dead.
©2006-2008 ~Papillon-Raissa
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Submitted: December 30, 2006
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I'd had the 1st line floating aorund in my head for ages, scribbled it down, mum found it *cue agonising excuse of "erm... something for english... playing with language... images..." in response to "WHAT is THIS?"*
and then today these words just seemed to come to me - it's just an image really, short and sweet, it just needed completing!

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~Roselani:iconRoselani: Jan 3, 2007, 4:26:34 PM
i likee ^^ would this have been that piece of writing u were worried bout ur mum findin that day? lol

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~Papillon-Raissa:iconPapillon-Raissa: Jan 5, 2007, 12:07:04 PM
no - that's VERY private. thank god she didn't lol!
may I ask you why you like it? sos - trying to get critiscism so I can improve! and use it as a chance to practice analysis for english lit! :P but thanks.
~Roselani:iconRoselani: Jan 14, 2007, 8:42:55 AM
hehehe oo er im intrigued now :P u dont need criticism...the lines jus kinda jumped out at me and i liked them...

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~Papillon-Raissa:iconPapillon-Raissa: Jan 14, 2007, 11:08:03 AM
thanks... but i do! that's why i ask for it lol
~Roselani:iconRoselani: Jan 14, 2007, 4:01:46 PM
well you shouldnt :P because you are amazing ^^

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~Roselani:iconRoselani: Jan 15, 2007, 4:12:41 PM
so are you when you say i am pretty :P

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~Roselani:iconRoselani: Jan 15, 2007, 4:12:57 PM
in this case im not bein biased...i like it <3

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